it was decent, and yeah the vocals need to be louder. it kinda reminds me of some of ad frank's stuff.



i still need to check those out. maybe tonight.

Minus the vocal level changes suggested earlier and the electronic percussion (which I think takes away from the song), I think this is solid. The guitar and keyboard work great. I'm definitely interested in hearing more.

I liked it a lot overall, Todd. I thought the beats came in a little too loud and fast to start to sart the song, though. It reminded me of a little of a punkier/faster Electric President

Here's Insomnia by them. Not that great of a video, but a great song, I think.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=OWz00tNb2IU

As an FYI: I'm taking this down in a couple of days.
I just want to keep it in context with the rest of the album and the diversity therin.

Thanks so much for all the feedback. And I'm excited that y'all liked it. Seems to me like I just need to stick to my guns a bit more and put out what the hell I hear in my head instead of listening to other folks, because this came out pretty much exactly like what I intended.

Hope you listen some more and, I'll let you know when there's another new song up.

Thanks.