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Money, Message, Media 44%  44%  [ 8 ]
Strategy. Grassroots. Finance. Communications. 56%  56%  [ 10 ]
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Elvis Fu
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Completely nitpicky, but I suggest dropping the LLC. It's clumsy and adds no value outside of how you drew up the paperwork. Think about pitching for Bass Pro Shops LLC or Nike, Inc. It's just not necessary.

OVERALL, though, I love that it's not some goofball Flashturbation.


It's a legal thing. Srsly. In Alabama if you don't use it, you don't have protection.


Fair enough. IT DRANK GOOD.

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Completely nitpicky, but I suggest dropping the LLC. It's clumsy and adds no value outside of how you drew up the paperwork. Think about pitching for Bass Pro Shops LLC or Nike, Inc. It's just not necessary.

OVERALL, though, I love that it's not some goofball Flashturbation.


It's a legal thing. Srsly. In Alabama if you don't use it, you don't have protection.


Fair enough. IT DRANK GOOD.


Yeah, I even showed the damn thing to my lawyers before going with it...I don't like it, but they insist.

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I understand that you, of all people, know this crisis and, in your own way, are working to address it. You, the madras-pantsed julip-sipping Southern cracker and me, the oldman hippie California fruit cake are brothers in the struggle to save our country.

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Is Alabama in some sort of race to the bottom with South Carolina?

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Is Alabama in some sort of race to the bottom with South Carolina?


Mississippi.

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I understand that you, of all people, know this crisis and, in your own way, are working to address it. You, the madras-pantsed julip-sipping Southern cracker and me, the oldman hippie California fruit cake are brothers in the struggle to save our country.

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i would make everything littler
littler logo
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actually on firefox if you hit ctrl or apple - ...twice... that's how i would make it look

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Also, I hate slogans, but I like this one.

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and why are we trying to find the last piece of the puzzle that hides the flag?
do you hate the troops?

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and why are we trying to find the last piece of the puzzle that hides the flag?
do you hate the troops?


I thought about that as well...its catchy enough though

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I understand that you, of all people, know this crisis and, in your own way, are working to address it. You, the madras-pantsed julip-sipping Southern cracker and me, the oldman hippie California fruit cake are brothers in the struggle to save our country.

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Between this thread and my current struggles with a new company website, Im really starting to hate website design.

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Between this thread and my current struggles with a new company website, Im really starting to hate website design.


Fuckers just cancelled my class I was starting on Monday.

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No offense to you or any of the other designers on the board, Fu. Its just difficult to convey sophistication on the web without alienating the Rubes who make up 99% of the web using public.

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No offense to you or any of the other designers on the board, Fu. Its just difficult to convey sophistication on the web without alienating the Rubes who make up 99% of the web using public.


It's all a fine line, for sure. You know, if we can help you at all....

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harry Wrote:
I understand that you, of all people, know this crisis and, in your own way, are working to address it. You, the madras-pantsed julip-sipping Southern cracker and me, the oldman hippie California fruit cake are brothers in the struggle to save our country.

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Elvis Fu
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Yail Bloor Wrote:
No offense to you or any of the other designers on the board, Fu. Its just difficult to convey sophistication on the web without alienating the Rubes who make up 99% of the web using public.


It's too much masturbation. I finally admitted that I hate web design because I'm not good at it. I was gonna take some classes to kickstart a revolution but that will have to wait for now.

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Sen. Posh Oltorf LooGAR Wrote:
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No offense to you or any of the other designers on the board, Fu. Its just difficult to convey sophistication on the web without alienating the Rubes who make up 99% of the web using public.


It's all a fine line, for sure. You know, if we can help you at all....


I've got some technical stuff to work out before I finalize the look/content but thanks for the offer. I haven't been much help to you with yours but the Obs (as usual) are coming through with some fine suggestions.

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Yail Bloor Wrote:
Between this thread and my current struggles with a new company website, Im really starting to hate website design.


new company?
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Between this thread and my current struggles with a new company website, Im really starting to hate website design.


new company?


new for me.

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Shit dude. I'm really happy for you. This is scary/exciting.

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Me - "Dude, we need some bitches and steak up here like right now."

Dave - "Consider it done."

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As a counterpoint, the body language isn't telling me that you're poised to jump into action for your client(s). I'd swap this picture out.


also, except for the pda or whatever in your hand, it's a bit Masterpiece Theater
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tentoze Wrote:
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Me - "Dude, we need some bitches and steak up here like right now."

Dave - "Consider it done."

Image


As a counterpoint, the body language isn't telling me that you're poised to jump into action for your client(s). I'd swap this picture out.


also, except for the pda or whatever in your hand, it's a bit Masterpiece Theater


You look like a former pro-wrestler trying to go legit, who is being annoyed by the camera man.

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You should have a b&w shot of you yelling at someone on the phone, something that looks like a behind the scenes photo-journalistic shot of a previous campaign effort.

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guys - that's how I look 98% of a normal day. I can't do anything about it.

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