go ahead, then...

https://vimeo.com/50218257

There's a lot to be proud of in there. Good luck with it.

This is very much an amateur critique but on first view I thought it looked really good, was nicely edited, nice direction, good naturalistic performances from the actors, believable dialogue and the transition from 'aarrghh! stressful day' to 'yeah! I'm free of the all the bullshit!' was strong and came across really well.

Damn, dude.

That was very, very good.

Nice use of "Say Valley Maker", too.

I am impressed. Well done!

Real nice work, Sam!
I'm going to share this with my wife, if that's cool with you. I think that she would adore it and totally relate to Maria.
(She was very large when pregnant and has always loved swimming in the river/lake/ocean, more than anything.)

good stuff

i busted a gut at the "nine-month tourist visa" line

thanks fellas